I find the blogosphere amazing and the ‘void’ that people talk about intrigues me.
When you look in one direction you see familiarity and in the other you see the unknown. Which direction will you travel? Will you travel with me through an unknown entity? Will you take the chance or will you go back to familiarity. There’s so much out there it would be a shame to miss something. I am often delving into area’s of the unknown and here is my chance to lead you with a familiar hand into a world of something different.
As part of the Daisy Lemma’s Riff, I give you the next chapter…….
The bells rang in the far out distance, I felt the cold shadow embracing my shoulders like a lost forgotten embrace and the chills ran up and down my spine. Unwanted kisses lingering too long. “Move your feet” those words came from a determined chin and clenched teeth. “Damn it, Move”.
With a twisted hook, I pushed the life into my barely there toes and reached both hands down behind me. What a time to fall over, somewhere far behind ‘it’ was searching, I could hear the call, I could smell the baited breath breathing, drawing ever closer in the dim facetted light behind me.
The closed door with the shafts of light echoed beyond the murmurings of strangers, countless blank smooth faces with no definition. A trick of the light maybe! Too much vodka in my soda, possibly! Who knows? But every one of those haunting faces just pale fluorescent shadows of an inner secret, screaming into my soul “We know you, we know your secret”
I just had to get out of there, the enchanted memories, the token encounters, the familiar scenery, the smells just all pull me into something I can’t quite piece together. What is ‘it’ that haunts my waking moments, lulls in my nightmares and evades my dreams?
The large panelled door with a familiar engraving was an exit to my torment as I made my way through the sea of unfamiliarity and rose against my inner wave of guilt. I traced my fingers across the outline of an elephant, the eyes deep and sad, triggering pieces of my fragmented mentality, rummaging through what was left of the icy shards of my memories. It had to be here, it just had to be.
I leant against it, teasing the handle behind me still untrusting of those strangers, that mocking laughter, the faces. Oh the faces, the undefined faces caught in a loop of time, the knowing, the provocation – it was searing through me and I needed to escape. As I twisted the handle I heard the click, a few twitches in the crowds meant they heard it too but the draw of the music and the endless time kept them phased just between their reality and mine.
I slithered backwards and sidled in between the cold wood and the frame, the coolness of the air caught my breath and the faint dewiness of lemon tainted the edges of my mouth. A fingertip touch, a velvety caress slowed my breath as it encased my lips. My eyes naturally responded and closed “Have you seen this?”
The words erupted through me, jolting me into the fact I was not alone.
“I’ve been waiting for you”
Has this caught your attention well **Read the other chapters here:
Welcome To The Void
Waking Up
Eternity
Eternity 2
Reality Of A Dream
Fragments
Dream or Not, “It Spoke to Me”
Bronze Elephants
Lot More Riff



Howdy! This is my first comment here so I just wanted to give a quick shout out and say I really enjoy reading through your posts. Can you suggest any other blogs/websites/forums that deal with the same topics? Many thanks!
A ghostly feel…enshrouded in the emptiness…love the picture…will we every escape…” I’ve been waiting for you”…love it….fade to black…the void feels like it has engulfed me again….well done!..
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Wow. I have some reading to do!!! This is amazing writing. Truly beautiful.

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Chapter 13 is up – Anna’s Obsession – http://annalwalls.blogspot.com/2011/02/ongoing-story-of-daisy-lemmas-riff.html
Whoa when did I step into a suspense thriller????? Awesome job.
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To Jorie, Pamela, Rimly, Jessica and Jessica and Tbaoo your support is awesome and I thank you from the bottom of my heart oxox
lot’s more time required to catch all of this, the atmosphere created above sure does set a marvellous tone ..

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Wow, Smoking…. Loved it
Jessica
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Wow…I was unfamiliar with your story until now. I’m going to make a point sometime soon in reading the preceding chapters. I love how you write…very descriptive.” Anyways…great post!
Jessica recently posted..The Battle to Believe
Wow! That was awesome. Really love the way you write.
Loved it!!! I think . . .I’m. . .stuck. . .in. . . a. . .void!
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I’m speechless or am I really?!!! You did a remarkable job with this post SJ! Bravo to you!
That picture fits perfectly with the story as well… Cheers!
OMGGGGGGGG you never cease to amaze me…..”just between their reality and mine” WHOA…….my head is spinning from the places you just brought me with your words…and the graphic fits right into my legacy….wow Sj wow!!!!! As always….XOXOXOXOXO
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And to you hunni you never cease to amaze me – Thank you oxox
Where did this come from and how did I miss it? Great work SJ!!!! I’m a wee bit envious at your greatness..
Love A
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Thank you AJ that means a lot to me especially coming from you. I have no idea actually, it just did but there was a lot of inspiration from the other posts. Your turn now
The VOID a dreaded space. You writing was descriptive yet there I could sense that emptiness… The picture is just perfect.
Thank you, it’s very different to my normal writing and kind of refreshing to let it out too
Wow, loved it!!
Thank you Jeana – that means a lot to me
Fantastic addition – love your story and the pic is great….
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Thank you I was really nervous posting it – my heart was literally in my throat as I hit publish.
Great addition to the story, adding your chapter now
Loved it SJ!!
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I had a lot of inspiration from the previous posts – yours included
Oh, my. I’m afraid there is no way out of the riff!! Really stunning, I was so engrossed, honestly hanging on each word. You know I’m a fan. Wonderful addition to the story!
Thank you and not just for the comment – for introducing me to this.
you have entered the void and welcome all, grab hold of your dreams they have be come real . grrreat post and the elepant will bow at your feet thank you love the picture.
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It’s exciting isn’t, I’m thrilled to be part of this.